WHAT IS THIS GARBAGE?
Just kidding.
Sorry about the incredibly delayed reply, I haven't been on here in a while :3
I really like what you've done here, it's pretty smooth and the synths are nice. However, I do agree with khay8 in the fact that it is repetitive. There's nothing wrong with being repetitive as long as it is consistently interesting. Perhaps a change up in melody or rhythm will keep things fresh? Also, I notice that this song gives almost a dreamy feel, and that feeling can be improved on if you add sounds that give depth, or give echoes and or reverb to the sounds you already have. Good luck man, I know you'll make it!